Returning from their vacation, the Brothers Carmichael waste no time revisiting the sinister Marsh Bank House. A Victorian manse with secrets inside that are starting to wake up…
Last time the paranormal brothers retired for a break in Wales after an encounter, with spectral Knights Templar, in a ruined chapel outside the boundary of Compton Cemetery. Alas, that was but the first skirmish and, while exploring a castle, they stepped into a second time drift that once again had another Master addressing them directly.
They have now returned home, to revisit the house where their strange observations began, with the disappearance of a pregnant woman in a house, or room, that swallowed her into the past.
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“I am not what you think I am.”
The paranormal brothers Allan and Joseph Carmichael looked at each other, and then back to the apparition in front of them. A rather attractive lady, wearing a late Victorian two layered bustle skirt, with matching ruched blouse. Being of spectral extraction, the colour was indeterminate and limited to transparent white, on the basis the woman herself was not as solid as the corporeal investigators.
It was Allan that spoke up first, “What is it you think, we think, you are?”
Owing to dryness of throat, this came out as more of a weak rasp, despite efforts to whip up saliva and lubricate the vocal chords. Joseph, the taller of the two, by some two inches at just under 6ft, shook his head in disgust.
“Way to show confidence Al,” he whispered from the corner of his mouth in a poor attempt at ventriloquy. It was not unnoticed by the shade who smiled demurely and floated towards them.
“I think, you think that I am a ghost.”
Despite the ethereal aspect, her words were solid enough. Softly spoken with an element of authority.
Allan dropped the hammer he’d used to pry off the boards covering the front door of the old Hamilton place, across the street from where they had kept vigil since hearing about the potential for psychic phenomena. It struck the floor with a resounding dead thump, that caused the revenant to shy away. A hammer had been used here before, except then Allan had been a Jonathan. Joseph watched his temperature gauge plummet to just about that of his fridge, and noticed his breath beginning to fog in the air at each exhalation.
Why do we always do this in the middle of the damn night?
Nerves were beginning to jangle internal warning bells. The moon, being almost full, was not helping matters by poking eerie fingers of light through gaps in the shreds of old drapes; illuminating the inside enough to reveal the cringing shadows probably held secrets. Through the shimmering lady he could see the outline of, what was once, a grand staircase leading upwards.
“But you are a ghost surely. This place has been derelict for years and is a prime site for our research into…well, ghosts.”
The woman drew closer gesticulating towards the entrance door behind them. “I rather think that depends on your perspective. To me you are the apparitions that have just walked through my front door.”
Allan looked back, following the line of her pointing, trying not to shiver. His insides suddenly felt quite nauseous. A none subtle elbow caught Joseph in the ribs, causing him to slowly follow the direction his brother’s open mouth was gaping at.
”Oh crap,” was all he could manage.
The boards, Allan had hacked through with the hammer, were back up on the inside and covering the front door. More to the point, there was a pool of dark liquid surrounding the head of the very same implement that had been cast to the floor. Despite the poor lighting, neither brother considered it to be anything other than blood.
Allan pulled his sibling to one side. The shade remained near staircase.
“Time to beat a hasty retreat Jo. I’ve got a real bad feeling about this.”
Joseph eyed his brother followed by a quick look back at the woman.
His voice, barely audible, whispered, “Give it five more minutes and make sure you’re recording this too.”
Both were equipped with a couple of hidden cameras. One infrared and one visible; unbeknown to either of them they were busy storing video footage of an empty house.
“Your call Jo, but I now hold you entirely responsible for our untimely demise.” There was a resigned feel to Allan’s voice.
Joseph turned back to the woman and took a step forwards feigning confidence. “So who are you then?”
The lady gave him an eerie smile.
“Elisabeth Beechworth some might say.”
Some might say? He thought, what’s that supposed to mean?
Allan carried it on, “What year is it?”
“1875 clearly,” was the surprised reply, “why what year is it by your calculations?”
Joseph cocked his head, “2000, or at least it was when we came in here.” He paused for a moment before continuing, “what do you mean by some might say?”
Elisabeth’s aura sharpened revealing facial features that caused Allan to stare. “I am many things in many times. In this place I am Elisabeth.”
The brothers looked at each other.
“Roll with it?” mouthed Allan.
Joseph nodded consent before carrying on talking to the spectre. “And you are not a ghost you say?”
Elisabeth exuded confidence, “Absolutely not.”
Allan chipped in, “And you are saying that we, in fact, are?”
She produced the captivating smile again. “Consider, if it is 1875 and I am right, it would infer you have yet to be conceived. By my reckoning you are therefore from the future and have made a grievous mistake by coming into my home.”
Joseph was now feeling seriously unsettled. Five minutes must be up, time to leave. He shuffled backwards, leaving Allan in discourse with the ghost that wasn’t. He turned to try and remove the boarding that had somehow self assembled back into the doorframe when they first encountered Elisabeth. His stomach fell towards the floor as he watched his own hands encounter an unseen wall, that prevented him actually reaching the wood. Wafer thin. He could slide up and down the outer edges of the planks but not get any purchase. In controlled, but rising panic, he ran to the window and found these were similarly barred. Time appeared to slow down as he turned back toward the staircase. There was no doubt his physician would have much to say about both current heart rate and blood pressure.
Allan meantime was deep in conversation and things were going from slightly wrong into fingers in ears not listening, blah blah blah.
“By similar argument, if it is 1875, then you are long dead; being the victim of a house fire in that very year.”
Elisabeth remained unperturbed.
“That may be so, but given you cannot pass out of this house,” she nodded towards Joseph scrabbling unsuccessfully at the window, “I will wager it is more likely you, not I, that has passed on.
There was a shrill shout in his direction from the adjoining room.
“Al, I can’t find a way to get out!”
Elisabeth smiled once more; except it looked smug and unwholesome.
“Tell me, have you ever been to the room upstairs?”
Joseph was back, out of breath with impact bruises on his knuckles caused by angry pounding on wall that simply should not be there.
“Which one?” he managed to ask between gasps. The cold air was really biting now.
She turned to face him directly. Somehow her eyes were now filled with both fire and ice. “Top of the stairs, directly in front of you.”
Allan turned to his brother. Despite the cold he was suddenly rather clammy. Two days previous they had done a daytime exploration. Testing the way in and wandering up the dusty stairs taking a peak into a room and noting how out of time it looked.
“Errr, maybe…” he said.
If you made it here, then thank you for taking the time to read. Like I’ve said before, these add back story to other books; and yes, I know they need tweaking, but if they become a manuscript then that is where the transformation from short story anthology will turn into the real deal.
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And now the bad news…or good news if you hate the genre, or writing…this is as far as this tale is spun. Almost two years have passed since I engaged with the brothers. Time was spent with my novel, The Assent of Rose Marie Gray. This is now complete and proofed awaiting some fortune with finding a publisher. Another, entitled The Bequest, is part written and this finds the third paranormal brother, Conrad Carmichael, on a path that Joe Stringer has forecast as leading to his untimely end. There is an extract on this deeper in my blog under the category;
Three excerpts in fact where you may find a character that I’ve quite warmed to; Rowena the Goth. There is also another book written, and awaiting my revisions, that blends the publican, Derrick, from here into a darker world. One that ties in the Blue Lady and disappearance of the barlords best friend.
All these stories intertwine and characters collect in each. Travelling in different directions along a web of intrigue that all began with the tale here, on my blog, called
That was the very first thing of fiction that found a blank page filling with words. From it all things have grown. This piece is very sad in the ending. Just know, in advance, that not all is as it seems. The cast list; Dave, Rose, Emily and Chloe appear in many places. Often out of time and in different worlds filled with…well, that would be spoilers.
The question for you, dear reader, is do I advance the brothers here?
Do you want to know if they escape Elisabeth and the house, or rather that ill fated room? What is the connection with the Knights Templar?Who killed Jake? What is it that dwells in the center of The Marshes? And, what lies on the arms of the untold segments of the pentagram?
I, alas, have no idea…
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