“Rune Lore shifts in time. Lost in translation as ages pass and Keystones become victims of age. Use not a rune that you do not understand. Many are enchanted with dark magic.” Jeremiah Delalande, Lecture on Necromancy.
“I am not looking to escape my darkness, I am learning to love myself there.”
Rune Lazuli
“I have been accused of being a ‘black magician.’ No more foolish statement was ever made about me. I despise the thing to such an extent that I can hardly believe in the existence of people so debased and idiotic as to practice it.”
Aleiester Crowley
This is another short story for this month’s prompt as I explore the world of the Necromage.
Dragon Stone: Rune Lock
The Necromage moved toward the Chapel of the Undead, satisfied the rune locks were active, and no future wanderer through the Dragon Gate could access the deeper necropolis. Once the sanguisuge was expelled, he would call on The Matriarch to seal the portal to her Heart Stone. That left only the entry gate, and the dead would be tasked to hold that secure.
Outside, he concluded the sun was ebbing in the twin-mooned sky. Soon, dusk would fall. He knew this because the undead stirred within the chapel. So far, his touch was a caress. Skimming the essence of the creature within. A deeper act of necromancy would follow once it was added to the Library of Souls and collected.
If that was the chosen path and it refused to join his ranks. It may be better to let it flee and then send it to the earth as a watcher on the other side of the Gate. Either way, it would either willingly offer the whereabouts of elf and dwarf or find the dark arts extracting it.
He approached the stone steps, wary that decay and lichen smeared the risers. The doors hung in rotted shards off old iron hinges that had rusted to almost nothing. The slightest of breezes would send them crashing to the floor now and likely most of the stonework it was attached to. Mortar crumbled under the steady drip of time in a dark cubiculum fuelled by moisture and rot. Even the air was now toxic to those with living breath to inhale it. He considered the rune lock overkill. If anything breached the gate into the catacombs, then slow death would follow as mould spores opened to infest lungs that would join this cubiculum full of rancid fluids.
Matriarch, can you meet me on the other side of this Dragon Gate? Between us, we can snare this revenant and then close the portal.
The reply was instant: I am waiting, fool.
The Necromage allowed a smile. All dragons adopted superiority. It was a trait their kind showed as arrogance. It had undone them once, and this time, he would ensure the task ran to completion.
He turned his mind back to the tomb. The path to the mercuric lake rose in a spiral near where the catafalque inside rested. The map he carried from the Builder, who was a willing accomplice. Not that he was stupid enough to know that escaping the silvery tomb was his primary goal. Then again, stupidity rested with the Builder. If he felt his soul would rest once the lake drained, then it might be that he’d want it filling again once he touched him again.
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Inside the coffin, the sanguisuge stirred, aware now that something stalked its mind. Mild amusement surfaced; if this were a grave robber, then they would receive an unexpected bounty. Perhaps a small token of what was about to transpire might add the effect, add a touch of creepiness to the creature outside that was about to find death waiting. Then, it would be time to hunt down the Dhampir daughter. His hands flexed as his mind drew on the mists of the vampire.
The Necromage stood watching. Mild amusement filled him. If he were a man clutching a torch in the darkness that cast fingers of dim light into the shadows, the effects might cause terror. Providing, of course, that he could breathe the toxic vapours permeating the cubicula. As it was all before him was visible. He could see fog drifting through the coffin lid to spill on the floor. A sheet that covered the ruinous path ahead. A vapour of false confidence. Nocturnes were as bad as dragons for arrogance, and it seemed this one lived by it. The price so far was to lose an arm to the elf. Granted, undead were regenerative, but lessons should be learned, not ignored. If she has bested him once, next time, it might be his head.
He pointed the serpent staff toward the tomb, using it to probe through the mist while necromancy did the rest. To think an undead could lock him out demonstrated arrogance. Anything glaring through cemetery eyes was wishing his reach. It was just a matter of when he would turn the screws. Fear was his first move. Enough to crawl through its mind, creating a need to flee. If that succeeded, he need never reveal his presence. A considerable advantage in a war of minds. Further damage to the crypt was to be avoided. Losing one access to the lake rune was unacceptable. To lose a second would be stupidity. He sent the instruction to fly laced with religious overtones in an effort to persuade what lay within that an exorcist approached the coffin.
The response was instant. The drifting fog of the undead ceased, leaving tendrils to dissipate amongst the debris on the floor. Any remaining near the catafalque was sucked back inside the coffin. The Necromancer felt arrogance turn to dread as his touch sank in. Embellished with the demise of past vampires that had crossed swords with those intending to destroy them.
Inside the coffin, red eyes flared open as the image of a stake plunging into one of the ancients entered his mind. The vampire’s torso arced upwards as the wood entered. A moment of pure agony before flesh turned to ash as a sanguisuge long centuries turned to a husk whose bones crumbled into the death shroud it once rested on. So real was the vision that it felt as if his life was ending. Rage blurred with anxiety. What sort of monster could invade his mind with hallucinations of exorcists? The urge to fight fled, and his attention turned to escape. The route to the portal was locked in his mind. A few hundred meters and this god-forsaken Chapel would pass into a bad memory. The original choice was accidental, and injury coinciding with sunrise had forced him into a cave. One that seemed innocuous until he explored deeper and found himself passing through a shimmering vertical membrane. It was after passing through that he beheld a room with all an undead required. Solitude, time to regenerate and darkness blacker than night. A mighty kingdom from which to grow a legion of followers.
On top of a once ornate catafalque sat a black oak coffin. Ideal for resting and, for some reason, vacant apart from some ancient bones that he discarded on the floor. Now, peace has been invaded by something more ancient than even he was. Worse still, it carried an evil that surpassed his own. One that delved inside the minds of the dead and extracted all memories as if they were scrolls in a library. He counted down and hurled the coffin lid in the direction he thought the nightmare stood. After that, he fled.
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The Necromage watched. Impassive and smiling. The lid crashed into the floor some distance away, where it shattered. Another worm-ridden carcass that this dank cubiculum had rotted to nothing. The vampire, he knew, was intent on escape. Leaving the bones of the husk that once rested inside his place of trespass was a mistake. A hand of bone closed as he began a conjuration to reanimate the husk. It was followed by a single command, “Follow.”
A shade rose from the bone pile. A single glance at the Necromage killed any desire to refuse. Instead, it turned and flowed after the undead creature that had just passed through the Dragon Gate.
Matriarch, the undead, has left the Necropolis.
So, I have witnessed. The revenant stands guard. It is now trapped between that and the oncoming dawn.
Satisfied, the Necromage moved to the catafalque. It was as the Builder described. Hidden under dust and mildew, there was a rune stone. In the centre was a hole into which he placed his staff. The serpent’s eyes illuminated blood red. Somewhere, an old mechanism creaked into action. Isolated from this cubiculum’s atmosphere in a shaft so ancient even the dust had decayed to nothing. The catafalque lurched backwards, exposing a narrow stone stairwell. Unlike those he had already encountered, the risers remained unsullied by use.
Watch while I drain the lake. If either leaves the cave, let Dragons Breath decide their fate.
As you wish, Boy. Be swift.
The use of Boy was new. Something was amiss. He frowned as an unlikely thought invaded his confidence. That was the word used by The Black. One who was close to the Matriarch. Had that intercepted his sends?
No matter, The Black could be turned. It was dead in this world already. But if it had joined The Matriarch, it could present a greater risk, or he stood to let the gravity of his idea settle. He held the Heart Stone of the old wyvern, and The Black belonged to a Hybrid, both of whom were dead in one world or another. Was it possible to draw all to his ambitions? It could wait until he accessed the lack drain.
The stairs spiralled upwards in a tight coil. Unlike the cubiculum outside, it was arid and dedicated. Part of the old complex, and it had not passed him by, had a further descendant stairwell disappearing into the depths below, presumably to additional levels that had lain unsullied by outsiders for an eternity. He paused, even older knowledge to be exhumed when time allowed. The smile returned. A horde of undead could be rallied here to create a mighty black army. This thought had appeal.
The stairs ended in another chamber. A level between levels. Builder, did an Assassins network once thrive here?
Aye, even in yore, distrust existed. The solution rested with espionage and political culling if the ambitions served from those of the Originator.
Noted, Builder. So, the husk trapped within a conjurer’s bubble was a dictator. Also gifted with strategy, which meant caution was needed. If there were a way out, it would no doubt find it.
Ahead, he spied another rune lock. This one he understood. The drain rune lay to one side. Immaculate and almost out of the reach of time. More knowledge he could use. A thought struck him: the spy network would include the hatchery. The implication was that the eggs could have been tampered with long ago. Was The Matriarch aware?
He activated the drain, and more ancient machinery turned in the distance. In the Chapel of the Dead, a silvery pool began to empty.
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Outside and overwatching the Dragon Gate, The Black heard all. It was here at the request of an old friend. At the edge of the cave stood one it had heard of. The father of the elf. He could pass, but the husk behind would burn. Vast wings unfurled, providing darkness to the cave. There is another cave nearby. Seek it, Vampire.
The undead needed no further prompting. As it left, Dragon’s Breath filled the cave, melting rock and blending it with the ashes of the husk. It left the tunnel smooth and the Gate unscathed. Attention now turned to locking it to The Black Heart Stone that sat with the Hybrid. Nothing save Wayland could now enter or leave. Any who forged a new tunnel would find themselves in another time and world; without the Gate, temporal displacement required old magic that was lost.
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The Necromage paused as he felt the husk connection break. It confirmed one thing: others were moving. If it were The Black outside, then it was there at the request of The Matriarch. That meant both intended to secure the hatchery. If they intended to regenerate Dragonkind, then he would need to make use of the Assassin’s network.
Builder, I need your assistance.











Gary, there are some wonderfully beautiful descriptions, here. This is one of my favourite settings of yours. I can smell the rot, can feel the damp emanating off the walls.
I also loved the interplay between the vampire and the necromage’s POVs. Great way to increase the tension, bouncing back and forth between the two.
Wonderfully rich and intricate lore, as always. I liked the twist of the Black protecting the vampire and coming in to mess up the necromage’s day. I know there are bits and pieces of this story I have missed – why are the dragons betraying the necromage?
Great final line, too!
Very generous Joshua. I figured you would like this part of the story arc. That said this character is old in my mind. Probably 15 years now. Just not set to script until recently. My latest one has more too. Although the date stamp seems off for some reason. As it post date.
Dragons I have as having no real allegiance. Only to actual Stone Bearers. Not sure if you can recollect the world lore, but the Necromage intended the extinction of both Elder Magi and dragons.
The vampire has been met before and is the father of Yish. The only dragon aligned with the Necromage is The Matriarch. This bit starts to show that deep in the past she and The Black were bonded.
Always that rich atmosphere which us ordinary folks would see as menace and dread, but for these powerful folk another working day, not that they treat the business casually.
There is a great deal going on here Gary, with a cast I am now becoming familiar with.
The slow steady approach of the Necromage is most certainly ‘creeping’, but there again in this world it would be the best approach.
Interesting ending with mentions of Wayland and The Assassin’s ‘Network’.
The saga continues
Glad you see it that way, Roger. I don’t see antagonists as there just to be the fall guys. I feel they should be as important as any other character. Built with depth and their own backstory that makes them seem more “real.” I think you’ll like the twist in next months. It caught me out when writing it so I have another character entering the tale in a very unexpected way.
Oddly I’ve just been creating the lead in to that Assassins network too.
I’m a bit behind reading this month’s batch too. I feel a bit of a cold doing battle at present.
Always look forward to our discussions once stories go live. Even if this one got put out a week early!
Januarys are by reputation months where things don’t go as intended. (I think of it as the month of gremlins).
It is interesting to get more in DS, the narrative being quite organic. One of those situations where trying to pin down heroes and villains as being something of a pointless task. Everyone is who they are going about their agendas.
Like so many a conflict through the course of Human history.
I’ll be interested to see the twist. They do ‘catch you out’ don’t they. Just because you are the writer doesn’t mean you have the control some books on writing suggest a writer ought to have.
Very true. Another character appeared this very day which cast the world build even deeper. I’m finding the Necromage an interesting one to write. Possibly too much so. He entered a Necropolis and events twist to keep him there. As you say this one is becoming out of the writer’s control. By the time you finish DS POI could be ready to test your thoughts 🤔
Moving slowly through the world. Somewhat in awe of the powerful imagery and concepts, and always careful to make sure no influences on my current work are stolen into my own narrative. (This helps being aware of the possibility causes distinct swerves which leaves me with the ‘OK that was alright. Now what do we do?’ issue common to indy writers.
I think in world builds moving slowly is like travelling the globe with a map. It’s never something to rush either or you end up with disjointed paths. My newest town is Icewater and in the current Necromage journey, one remembered a Necropolis is generally where a citadel places the dead. Ergo he’s now discovered beneath the sands lies such a metropolis older than the Elder Magi. It struck me this place appears to parallel the Vault. Well, it was actually the Necromage who put it together as opposed to the winter. Found a title for one of the BB follow-ups too, Garden of the Dead. I’ll leave you with that as this far you’ve yet to meet who is stuck there!
Nothing wrong with concept influences either. When you’ve spent over a decade pondering my own then sharing how it blends together is ok by me 😂
Icewater. Has a good fantasy feel to it. Carry on with your journey of exploration in this network of worlds of Dragon Stone.
Thanks for the generosity there Gary. Since I tend to soak up influences some of DS might will find its way into this narrative of mine, I’ll try and keep it to a minimum.
Thanks, but I need to start map making now too haha. Just finalised the next piece here too. Its got me quite intrigued now as to where it might lead.
As for influences, why not. We all take inspiration from somewhere. My latest writing research book it The Egyptian Book of the Dead… go figure haha.
That reminds me, I must redraw my ‘sketch’ map of the region, the narrative has naturally gone its own way and the original outline is obsolete.
Book of Dead. Why not?
I use the political military history of the past 150 years (ish) for backdrop for Realpolitik purposes.
Onwards, ever onwards.
I know that feeling. Not that I actually like making maps, but the bigger the world build the more necessary it is. Rather like character genealogy. My cast list needs its own design brief now 🤔
After a while this becomes a necessity to keep on course.
On my third book I realised this was ‘geopolitically’ getting tangled. To get around the task, one of the central characters Arketre decides to chart out all the relationships and links (She being of a military mind needs a ‘map’). This gets more and more comically confusing until she gives up, but keeps the map ‘just in case’.
Later on in the book a background superior but benevolent branch of Humanity (lllonnnnngggg story) find it and use it as a basis for a key into a mathematical discipline they have been trying to solve.
Don’t you just love it when ideas and sub-plots spin off out of throw-away episodes?
(I did my map by the way, geographically it is not much, but politically it suits fine)
Very true. I unearthed a map I did as a kid into D&D. Never through that material away and it’s seems destiny knee something I didn’t back them. Crude yes, but a decent map with a few changes is a good template. I looked online and there are a few fantasy writer map makers. But to me they are too complex for what I need. Unless you’ve hit months to zoom in and out with street names etc. I just need a scale graph paper version to use. Or a simple map app I can add to as I encounter new places. Same with a writer’s genealogy app. Why they overcomplicate it to ludicrous is beyond me.
Rachael produces some marvel maps. She put one up on FaceBook last week(ish) to illustrate her Twelve Realms series, breath-taking.
My latest is an A4 sheet, landscape orientation with pencilled in borders and names of kingdoms. Carried out this morning over breakfast so that two characters can discuss the political situation in their region.
It’s in pencil, so I can fiddle about with the size of kingdoms to suit the dialogue when ‘some’ ‘bright’ idea surfaces 😀.
Panster Ad Hoc ! (or should that be ‘Ad Hoc Pantser’ ?🤔)
Rachael is gifted there and does her own covers as part of her book services. A case of easy if you know how! My morning was spent on POI. Such is the intrigue I’m now back at the boy before he came to be Amanuensis where he met an Assassin who gave him a card….
Working this way is a journey in itself.
With a smidge of RPG without a Gamesmaster or a complicated rule book
Haha, that is where my old map came from as a Dungeon Master. I think I added almost 1k words today too. NaNoWriMo best beware!
Savour those days when you are on a roll Gary.
Ride those waves.
Had another root round the old D&D box and there it is. A map of the Keep with its original name and surrounding terrain. I now know where Yish originates and a quick addition will locate Naz!
I never bought into the tired cliché ‘all knowledge is power’. (History is littered with mis-used, mis-understood or ignored knowledge)
I do subscribe to a more useful and accurate one. All knowledge accumulated is vital. Naz will no doubt swiftly appear.
Its more useful than no knowledge 🤣. It seems no knowledge is power fits out politicos these days. Or maybe their knowledge is all in the wrong subjects supported by wealthy parents. Or a combination.
Your last bit is very accurate. We should be the sum of acquired knowledge, yet looking around the supermarket these days it was wise of evolution to make breathing an autonomic control. When I observe some I often think that’s just as well or many would asphyxiate.
I sort of have Naz’s background, just not an exact map location. Although it is mentally located now I think.
The words of the old song still hold true:
‘It an’t what you got, it’s the ways that you use it’
‘That’s what gets results’
I don’t know if the next is an adage or an observation encountered in many a commentary, but it seems in Democracy ‘You get the government you deserve’
A trip down the ‘political sites’ on social media seems to demonstrate that in terms of ignorance and prejudice no side has a monopoly. I tend to veer to a Hard Left, but would no more trust the UK Left than I would the UK Right with the governance of these isles. It would seem Fudge, Compromise and Muddling Through Down the Middle of The Road are the best options in this imperfect world.
Small wonder folk such as you and I are given to writing in the Fantasy genre.
As long as you have a mental fix on a character it’s plus. Keep on keeping on.
On old saying sums it up too, if things don’t change they stop as they are. Left and right are two extremes I think. Neither function in power as ideology overthrows sensible outcomes. Look at the two-faced legacy of Farage. Leave the EU at all costs while reaping his pension on the actual EU council. Get what you deserve is the outcome, many of whom now regret it. Moaning achieves nothing now as we are where we are! Must be Saturday sayings day.
I found the Covid enquiry embarrassing. Witty exposing a civil service packed with non stem qualifications that meant they did not understand the science. Move to the politicos and that understanding got worse with each reply. Same in the post office one.
What we really need is constant planning that each new government must buy into. Nothing for the NHS since Lord Bevin where a ten year plan ended and nobody thought it wise to make a new one. The three P’s spring to mind.
You don’t get that with well crafted characters 😂
As regards Covid, I suspect there was a great deal of contingency planning created by middle grade folk dusted off and put into action.
If left to their own devices it’s surprising what the lower echelons of Civil Service ranks can achieve; I was privileged to witness a lot of it.
Hence my saying to staff ‘You have achieved. Not because of Upper Management and Government but in spite of,’
One the planning problems is that consensus is rare between one government and another, even of the same party. Particularly when the governing group allows itself to be led by a ‘popular’ movement rather then lead. Farage being a classic case of the snake oil merchant variety. Johnson being of the ‘I should lead because I am really a jolly sort,’
Thus are but two examples.
Small wonder Fantasy creates from time to time Aragon(s).
And that’s why I created The LifeGuard, very much a state within a state. Semi-special forces, Semi intelligence agency, Semi Imperial Guard (at long distance). However their main ethos is Stability of The Empire, so if anyone (including an emperor) looks like they are causing Instability- they’ll be gone soon (one way or another).
Like many things or industries. Top management is often poor and that knocks down to moral issues below. If they don’t care, why should I. Likewise lack of monitoring mean staff get lazy for the same reason. You only need look at hygiene tick lists in supermarket toilets to know someone’s just ticked the box and not done the work.
I can see parallels as you mention wrt the LifeGuard. Hard not to draw in life experience and parody reality with a bit more common sense in the fiction.
In the LifeGuard world there are a few in our world who would not gain the traction they have (That’s all I can say; The LifeGuard don’t like me saying too much😉)
Secret sects and all that. The Magic of Enigma are provided very elusive at present. Still new prompt is live and I think my tale is ready to post!
Saw it last night before switching off.
Question is do I go:
Serious?
Mischievous?
Or
Enigmatic?
Enigmatic might be a good one given recent discussions on Mars and the universe. Same here. They are supposed to go out Fridays but WP seems to think the Friday dates are a Saturday for some reason even though it’s clearky scheduled on its calender for said Friday.
It’s confused because this is a leap year?
So much for AI 😂
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